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When Everything Comes Together

  • mariprofundus
  • Jun 6, 2025
  • 1 min read

The first stanza and half the 2nd stanza of this poem were recorded on my phone while mountain biking in 2020. Through quick reflexes but while still recording, I just avoided a small sink hole that surely would have made everything fall apart.

 

At the time I was mourning the loss of my friend Gene Kritter, and worried about the fate of my first grandson born three months premature, and two days after Gene died in a tragic accident. Camden’s doing great now, and I mourn Gene’s loss less, and mostly just miss him.

 

I don’t know why it’s taken so long to complete this poem; it’s the nature of how these things go, for me.

 



Three Times Ten

 

When everything comes together

Solar systems,

Entire galaxies,

Are digested.

Star stuff is born,

And expands into

A billion new

Possibilities:

From black holes

Are civilizations created.

 

When everything comes together

For the chosen few,

The mind

Unfurls and expands

Into actions

Practical and sublime;

That touch those

Fortunate among us

Who are present,

Here and Now.

 

When everything comes together

It is not necessary

To make a great noise,

But simply recognize

A valence

of consciousness:

Real like breath,

Like skin on skin,

Like a heartbeat,

That joins us all

 

 
 
 

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